The Jane Doe Novel Experiment

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Six Sentence Sunday – Snakes Don’t Talk

Ava looked at Carson with fresh eyes. Claire had once told her the story of Eve eating the forbidden fruit. She said the silliest thing about the account was that a snake told her to eat it.

“Deary,” she laughed, “snakes don’t talk! Eve should of took off runnin’ and screamin’, not negotiatin’ with the critter.”

Hearing her husband reply to Lily with such calmness and charm was the closest Ava would come to hearing a snake talk in her lifetime.

(Taken from, Enough for Four, Chapter 5, Part 2 to be released on Monday! Want all of my SSS? Click here.)

Photo Credit: http://sfrcontests.blogspot.com/2011/01/what-is-six-sentence-sunday.html

It’s an experiment! I spend Tuesday – Saturday writing a new episode of  Enough for Four. On Sunday, I take six sentences  from the episode to be released on Monday through  iTunes and this blog and give you a sneak peek. Writers, feel free to post your own 6 sentences in the comments below or a link to them. I look forward to reading them! Readers and Writers, the official site for tons of SSS from different writers are here: Six Sentence Sunday. Discover your new favorite author today!

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4 comments on “Six Sentence Sunday – Snakes Don’t Talk

  1. Teresa Cypher
    August 5, 2012

    LOL! Love it, Jane. “…was the closest Ava would come to hearing a snake talk in her lifetime.” Perfect zinger to end it with. And the local accent was fantastic. Enough to add atmosphere, but not so much it became a distraction. 🙂 Great six.

  2. veronicascott
    August 5, 2012

    Since snakes are my one HUGE phobia, I’m glad they don’t talk! Intriguing excerpt!

    • Jane Doe
      August 6, 2012

      Thank you, Veronica. Do you have a link as well? I would love to read it! Your cover is very well done and captivating!

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