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Six Sentence Sunday – His Favorite Girl

Nothing attracted Carson to her more than the fact that she knew nothing about him. Nothing about his work, how much money he made, or his reputation around town. She sure as hell didn’t know about his and his wife’s shared preference for females. Her ignorance of that last detail made it easy for Carson to over look the woman’s flaws. He purposely decided she was big-boned versus fat. Her hair was bone-straight versus thin.  Her being forty-seven and him being only thirty-five made her mature versus old. Her voice was unique instead of annoying and so on and so on and so on.

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Writers, feel free to post your own 6 sentences in the comments below or a link to them. I look forward to reading them!


4 comments on “Six Sentence Sunday – His Favorite Girl

  1. cpasquelene
    July 16, 2012

    He took her in his arms and thought, “Ah,screw it! If I’m going to leave her again at least I’ll let her know she means more to me than just the friend I’ve claimed she is. As his lips smashed against hers and he watched her wide eyes close in sweet release he knew he couldn’t leave.He could tell by the way her kiss tasted. The way her curves curved against him. Florian snapped back as the loudspeaker dinged the melody. He hurriedly wiped drool from the corner of his mouth, jumped to his feet, and shook Catherine Coyles from the dark corners of his mind.

    • Jane Doe
      July 16, 2012

      High and low all in six senteces. I enjoyed it! What story is this from? A WIP or something you’ve completed?

      • cpasquelene
        July 20, 2012

        It’s a short story I found myself in 7 years ago and I decided to turn into a Novela about 2 years ago but it’s a slow work in progress. So when ever you complete a chapter I’m completing 6 sentences. 🙂

      • Jane Doe
        July 20, 2012

        It’s a deal! I’m sure each set of six sentences will be amazing. ^.^

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